Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

:omfg:
 
About Me Member Traditional Artist alldrawkid9415/Male/Germany Recent Activity Deviant for 6 Months
Needs Premium Membership
Statistics 24 Deviations
8 Comments
472 Pageviews

my first entry lol

Mon Dec 14, 2009, 12:36 PM
  • Listening to: nothing
  • Reading: glasshouse, by charles stross
  • Watching: my laptop screen
  • Eating: ice cream
  • Drinking: in a second i will be drinking something. lol
well i dont know how, or what to do in the journal. i am bored. and i haave 3 days of school left.
and then hello christmas break. i will have a lot of time to draw on the brake, ^^.

deviantID

No deviantID yet.

Devious Info

  • Interests: drawing, art, computer graphics.
  • Favourite movie: starship troopers
  • Favourite band or musician: don't have a favorit.
  • Favourite genre of music: rock
  • Favourite style of art: traditional, pencil
  • MP3 player of choice: I don't have one.
  • Favourite game: crysis
  • Favourite cartoon character: I hate cartoons
  • Personal Quote: * keep hope alive*

deviantART Community Board

[x]

Comments


:iconprincewinterflurry:
Your drawings are really cool and keep up the good work.

--
Prince Winter Flurry
:iconmarkkarvon:
Thank you very much for the favorites and the nice compliments. I had a look at your gallery. Since you requested some feedback I will give a few suggestions.

I am happy to hear you draw every day. It is important to practice your craft often. The more you do, the better you will become at it.

I like that your line work is strong. Just be carful not to make it all too heavy. One thing to work on is to vary the thickness or weight of your lines. It will help portray your subjects in better detail and realism. Some artists find it helpful to work with pencils of varying lead hardness and thickness. I use everything from a 7H to a 4B in my drawing. The "H" pencils are hard; the "B" pencils are softer.

You are well on your way to getting a good handle on the shading. As an example, the work on the Camaro is nice where you have portrayed the reflective hood and the darker paint color. A good technique to use is blending the shading. This will smooth out the transitions between light and dark. Some folks use a blending stump, some use a tissue, I've always used my fingers. I don't really have the space to go into it in depth here but I am sure you will find some shading tutorials online if you look.

I like that your compositions fill the entire page. It is good to use the entire surface when creating a work of art. One thing to keep in mind though is you have to leave a bit of room for the subject to "move". It is generally not a good idea to draw the main subject right up to the edges of the paper.

You have the right idea with showing your subjects in perspective. Your subjects generally have good depth and volume. You need to work a bit more on getting the shapes accurate. Just remember to try and draw the shape as it exists not how your mind perceives it. It might be a good idea to look up some tutorials on perspective drawing.

If you are interested in making a career out of your artwork I recommend taking some formal classes at school. I had 3 years of drafting classes and a year of art classes. They were very helpful in laying a strong foundation for my drawing.

Keep at it. You are doing well. :)

Cheers,

Mark

--
Home of the Old 96er.

Fine Art by Mark Karvon [link]
Karvon Graphics [link]
YouTube [link]
:iconncmares:
I checked out you're gallery and instantly watched, as your ability to shade is incredible!

--
Ima writing a little story...
[link]
--
Today you all have a chance to be awesome and go home heroes, JUST like me...
:icondon4:
Gravy gallery, aslo. du sollst deine adrresse da nicht weil es safe nicht ist.

es ist freaks auf dem net und sie mogen 14 jahre kinder genau dir. so bitte, versucht safe sein.

i think it is better said in German rather than english

--
ich bin kein deustcher, ich sprache aber deutsch.
:iconmjp-70:
Thanks for the fav :)

--
MjP
:iconwyoairbus:
thanks for the fav man!

--
"If it weren't for the last minute, I'd never get anything done."

This quote pretty much describes my life^
:iconwisker:
Cheers for the favs.

--
Join the club ~20thCenturyWarfare

"The Pope! how many divisions has he got?"
- Stalin

Site Map